Thursday, August 9, 2012

My spider writing

spider
dear reader

Hey you boys and girls stop trashing my house do you see me coming up to your house and running through it? No (but of course I can't) so don’t destroy my house. I have million of about to hatch so don’t ruin it. It takes 12 hours to build a house or a city so don’t smash  it. OW!!! I do mean you. You  realise.

Sincerely Flit


Dear flit
I am very sorry for walking all over your web. I will try to stay away from you.
from cameron

dear cameron
will you try to stay away.  stay away  don't try?

dear flit
“I will stay away then


the next day cameron walked into his class and there was a spider hanging from the selling. a kid from his class was about to hit the spider with a baseball bat but CAMERON threw his bAG ON THE floor AND JUMPed FOR THE SPIDER. HE Caught THE SPIDER IN HIS HANDS AND ASKED TO SEE IF HE WAS ALL RIGHT.
HE SAID “YES” AND JUMPed OUT OF HIS HANDS AND CRAWLED AWAY.
“YES,” hE SAID AS THE SPIDER WENT AWAY.

6 comments:

  1. WOW great spider work It is great

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  2. Cool writing Henry,
    I think you have thought about your writing. I would be very sad if someone destroyed my house!

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  3. Amazing Henry! I love your writing and very descritive. I would be really sad if someone came and destroyed my house. WELL DONE AND KEEP UP THE AMAZING WRITING! :c)

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  4. Wow Henry. I love your writing. Well done.

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  5. nice pice of writting. really funny.






    ethin and george from room thirteen.

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  6. Great piece of writing henry , great job.
    Keep it up.

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