Showing posts with label p.writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label p.writing. Show all posts

Wednesday, May 2, 2012

what a camp

Rain doesn't stop parkvale kids.!!!
                                 
Room 18 and 19 went to camp mountain valley.

on april the 2 to april the 4 in those 2 days.
e went to mountain valley to tackle new challenges.  
when we went white water rafting we saw some waterfalls and wWe did white water rafting,
pistol shooting, archery and the amazing race it was really fun.
Archery was fun we had to do it inside. My group were
and so was tiryns. It was really awesome. I had great fun. Paige got a bulls eye.
When we saw one we would say hey look over there there's a waterfall.  While we were rafting we saw some people fixing a bridge one of them through a stone down.     
We did some cool activities like long ball.

Monday, March 12, 2012

2100!!!!

Planets
In the year two thousand 1 hundred some body will    
discover a new planet.  On a mission to outer space
there will be a team of astronauts shooting through space.
Some of the explorers get out of the rocket and into a space
buggy.  They discover they are on a new planet that
hasn’t been discovered yet.  They have 3 air tanks strapped
their bodies and as they get further away from
the rocket their air gets less and less.  They watch their  
gauges as their air slowly runs out because I think adults will be into exploring

transport
I think you will drive around in a hover craft because
there will be no petrol left. It will run on vegetable oil I think it will be
fantastic.


water
There will be no fish left in the whole world because we would of fished them all out of the water.There will also be no whales left because the Japanese have killed them and I think Japanese kill shark’s too.
Cruel Japanese. We will just have to deal with it.


EMPLOYMENT:
I think that robots will do all the work for us. We will be lazy and when everyone has a robot they will rule the world .We will be lazy and can’t move but hopefully people will still be fit .I will be one that is fit.

Friday, February 17, 2012

Buddy writing





THERE ONCE WAS A SHIP CALLED THE ROCK . AT ELEVEN O'CLOCK AT NIGHT THE SHIP CRASHED INTO SOME ROCKS. PEOPLE SCAMPERED OF THE BOAT AND ONLY THREE MADE IT OFF THEY WERE CALLED TYRIN HENRY AND JOSH. THEY NEEDED TO FIND SAFETY ALL THE COULD SEE WAS A LITTLE OLD WOOD HUT. SO THEY RAN INSIDE ALL THAT THEY COULD SEE WAS 4 SKELETON'S “AT LEST WE'VE GOT COMPANY’ HENRY SAID. “I WONDER HOW LONG THEY'VE BEEN HERE FOR” I SAID CREEEEEKKKK “WHAT WAS THAT” HEN SAID WORRIEDLY JUST THE FLOOR.HEY AT LEAST WE HAVE SOMEWHERE TO STAY TYRIN SAID HAPPILY” ME AND HENRY TURNED AWAY AND THEN NEK MINUTE TYRIN WAS GONE. ALL THAT WAS LEFT WAS MUDDY FOOTPRINTS SPOOOOKY. THEN WE SAW THE HATCH ON THE GROUND WAS OPEN. ME AND HEN QUICKLY JUMPED DOWN THE HATCH SMACK! WE HAD LANDED ‘OUCH THAT HURT’ I SAID PAINFULLY.IT WAS A DARK BLACK ROOM I SHONE THE TORCH ON THE GROUND AND MORE MUDDY FOOT PRINTS, SOMEONE WAS HERE. “TYRIN WHERE ARE YOU” WE CALLED NO REPLY “JOSH HEN ARE YOU HERE” “WAS THAT TYRIN” SAID HEN. ‘LETS FOLLOW THE MUDDY FOOTPRINTS’ I SAID SO WE DID WE FOLLOWED THEM AROUND UNTIL WE FIGURED OUT WE WERE JUST GOING IN CIRCLES AND THEN A HAND TAPPED ME ON THE SHOULDER ‘GET AWAY’ I SCREAMED AS LOUD AS LOUD AS A BABY . BUT IT WAS TYRIN” “HELLO THERE”HE SAID ‘LETS CLIMB BACK UP THE LADDER OVER THERE’ ‘THERE WAS A LADDER WE JUMPED DOWN’ ‘YEP YOU DID’ SO WE CLIMBED UP THE LADDER ‘WHO'S FOOT PRINTS WERE THEY’ I SAID. ‘THEY WERE MINE’ TYRIN SAID ‘WHAT BUT YOU WERE TAKEN BY SOMEONE ELSE’ ‘NO I WASN'T’.  ‘I STOOD ON SOME MUD THEN THE FLOOR STARTED TO CREEK THEN I FELT THE WOOD MOVING KABOOM I HIT THE FLOOR. THEN I WANDERED AROUND THAT'S WHAT LEFT THE MUDDY FOOTPRINTS YOU WERE AS  SCARED AS A MOUSE BEING CHASED BY A CAT WEREN'T YOU’ TYRIN SAID ‘BUT YOUR SAFE NOW LETS GET OF THIS ISLAND’. SO WE ALL RAN OUT OF THE HUT AND PICKED UP SOME STICKS AND WROTE SOS IN THE SAND ABOUT TWO HOURS LATER A HELICOPTER FLEW OVER THE ISLAND AND STOPPED AND LANDED ON THE ISLAND GET IN THE DRIVER SAID LETS GO HOME HOOORAY WE ALL SAID.

 THE END BY HENRY AND JOSH